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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-12-25 20:43:33 | T or D part 5 | The transitions are still not making any sense. The idea of the story is good, but you need more of a turn into the content. Right now, you have these ridiculous change ups that are kind of hard to swallow. |
| 2008-01-03 16:52:27 | T or D part 5 | ok since no one liked parts 3-5 i will allow you to tell me what to add on to part 2 i will make a new part 3 based on your ideas |
| 2007-12-26 13:56:47 | Karen and Michelle_(3) | I like it so far. You have started out strong and i'm lookin foward to the 1st chapter, keep it up |
| 2007-12-27 17:44:04 | Karen and Michelle_(3) | lame get to the part when get beat |
| 2007-12-28 02:53:28 | Karen and Michelle_(3) | You got my attention, which isn't an easy task. |