| 2008-01-13 10:24:55 |
iCarly's introduction
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Its long for nothing much to happen but still well written and pretty good, pt2 should have something happen though |
| 2008-01-13 12:19:46 |
iCarly's introduction
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i checked out the real icarly, and i'd totally fuck sam over carly anyday! |
| 2008-01-13 16:38:33 |
iCarly's introduction
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What the hell was this story really about as I lost interest |
| 2008-01-13 17:44:53 |
iCarly's introduction
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unfortunatley this is a sex story site. I wouldn't consider this a sex story. Even if this is the beginning of a series, each part should have a least a reasonable amount of sex. There are also a lot of puncuation errors as well. Very boring overall. A story this long needs action. Spend a couple paragraphs with the introduction and then move on to the sex. |
| 2008-01-13 20:59:13 |
iCarly's introduction
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WHERE'S THE SEX???!! .... I want SEX!!! |