| 2008-01-16 04:39:51 |
Belle_(3)
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I really like your style but , this time I think you should have seperated the two distinct themes.The fairy story was light, funny and still sexy, like your earlier works and the incest could have been made even steamier but together they were just too long. I gave it my first 10, partly to balance out some of the earlier brainless comments! |
| 2008-01-16 16:13:05 |
Belle_(3)
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One of my friends read me the first half of this story over the phone and I loved it! I was trying so hard to not fall in love with this guy, but i gave in. However, When I finished reading the latter part of the sister...my mind was corrupted...brother-sister fucking?......honestly, in my opinion.....THAT'S FUCKIN MESSED UP! |
| 2008-01-16 23:31:18 |
Belle_(3)
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that shit was whack u fagot ass bitch |
| 2008-01-17 01:56:33 |
Belle_(3)
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good story shulda cut the bit out bout the sister tho i skipped it it's just messed up |
| 2008-01-17 19:02:40 |
Belle_(3)
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Last part was horrid, first part was ten but you screwed it up.....oh man... |