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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-01-12 18:03:32 | My afternoon with Hayden | So untrue, but a good idea give the idea to a professional write so he/she can make it |
| 2008-01-12 21:44:26 | My afternoon with Hayden | part 2 !!!!!!! |
| 2008-01-13 01:44:41 | My afternoon with Hayden | you suck cock, but your story doesnt, good job |
| 2008-01-13 02:29:38 | My afternoon with Hayden | excellent |
| 2008-01-13 10:30:39 | My afternoon with Hayden | Not a bad first effort. I see other readers have stolen my thunder so to speak, but I'll say it again so maybe it will sink in. There is no way that the girl's "peach fuzz" vanished when her panties were removed and that fleshy thing in your mouth is not a lounge. Just a suggestion. Re-read your stories several times before submitting them. It won't eliminate the negative comments, but it will reduce them. 7/10 |