| 2008-01-19 22:21:59 |
The Tailor
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not bad! You could legnthen it up a bit more by adding more building up to the sex and more details in the sex. |
| 2008-01-24 18:43:32 |
The Tailor
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shite |
| 2008-01-13 06:44:52 |
iCarly's introduction
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What a boreing and unsexy story 2/10 |
| 2008-01-13 09:45:55 |
iCarly's introduction
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It's good, but quite long and nothing happened, pt 2 should be somehow different.... |
| 2008-01-13 09:48:28 |
iCarly's introduction
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this is well confusing, go make a fricking story that makes sense u shithead and fuck ur dad while ur at it |