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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-01-17 13:29:27 | Hannah_(0) | Very nice, please keep writing. There were a few mistakes but nothing to distract me from reading it. |
| 2008-01-17 21:56:46 | Hannah_(0) | i apologize for the story title. i uploaded it without naming it correctly. apart from that happy reading. |
| 2008-01-18 08:46:07 | Hannah_(0) | For chapter 2, please check for grammar and spell checks before posting. * 'Pack you’re things up.'=> Pack your things up *‘Quite!, quite!. I didn’t say you could talk!’ => Quiet! Quiet! ... * I’m going back out in a minuet though daddy. => ...minute... * Some sentences start with a lowercase character. Also, please be a little more descriptive (age, body measures, hair/eye colour etc.). |
| 2008-01-18 14:13:26 | Hannah_(0) | Not a bad effort, but your grammar and punctuation need some work. I know many readers bitch about these things, but please understand that a well written story gets many more favorable comments and votes. Keep up the good work! 8/10 |
| 2008-01-19 06:35:00 | Hannah_(0) | The story was a seven but the grammar was a one so I gave it a three. (didn't deserve a four) |