| 2008-01-19 06:50:17 |
Hannah_(0)
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It's obvious that you hated school, too. You certainly didn't pay much attention in your English classes. For your education, poor spelling and grammar reveal your ignorance and gains you no respect.... particularly when filling out a job application. It's never too late to smarten up. Put education into your brain..... "They can strip you and throw you naked into the street but no one can take what you know." |
| 2008-01-19 07:43:43 |
Hannah_(0)
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veeery awesome! part 2!! |
| 2008-01-20 09:32:51 |
Hannah_(0)
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what happend with the pool |
| 2008-01-20 23:41:39 |
Hannah_(0)
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Despite the poor capitalization and punctuation, it was a very good story, and easier to read than most written lacking in these categories. I'm looking forward to what's next. |
| 2008-01-17 23:27:37 |
Learning the Lifestyle-Tuesday
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Intresting, but it seemed a bit short, not that I enjoy cruel yarns,it could have been more intenst. Of course keep up the good writing. |