| 2008-02-12 14:26:34 |
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Great story, again...I like incest stories and all, and I know i'd love to see him fuck his sister, but try to come up with something different about the way they end up fucking. you're a good enough writer that i'm sure you can pull it off...one thought would be that kelly seduces brook in order to get to her brother, or just to relieve the sexual tension and then Tom catches them in the act or something. regardless, great story: 10/10 |
| 2008-02-12 14:36:41 |
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great the kid who wrote that this was utterly fuking horrible is retarded dont listen to him 10/10 keep it up |
| 2008-02-12 19:30:05 |
My Summer Boss 4
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U should right more about the work place not just the apartmant |
| 2008-02-12 22:38:12 |
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Not as good as Sister Ashley series. I'd like to see more of that, but this is a good side story. |
| 2008-02-12 23:03:57 |
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i think if he has to fuck his sister it should be his last way out like he has looked at it from every angel and the only way to fix it is to give his sister a good time 10/10 |