| 2008-02-16 19:28:45 |
My Summer Boss 4
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Great story. Write more, please. 10/10 |
| 2008-02-17 01:19:51 |
My Summer Boss 4
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Reader at 3:26 go fuck a cow, because thats all your limited moronic intelligence can comprehend. this was superb, 10. |
| 2008-02-17 01:23:47 |
My Summer Boss 4
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His grammar sucked ass. He sounds like a twenty year old retard still in kindergarten. |
| 2008-02-17 04:13:16 |
My Summer Boss 4
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i love the story line, but contructive criticism here, not so much the sister thing because i dont know about most men but if my sister ever pulled that shit towards the end of the story, that would possibly be the end of her life. but if you want her to play a part in this then do what you want. great either way :) ohh and thanks for the the two month wait, i think you like to have people beg you for another part lol. later |
| 2008-02-17 20:52:26 |
My Summer Boss 4
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i hope u dont make us wait another 2 months to get #5, uve done it again 10 |