| 2008-02-19 17:16:50 |
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Very well written, but I can't help feeling that all your stories follow a template for the sex scenes: boy gets handjob/blowjob, boy has sex but cums quickly, does it again lasts longer so girl gets orgasm. Seems like the sex could be more interesting, although that must be hard in a realistic first-time story. |
| 2008-02-20 00:45:56 |
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horrible |
| 2008-02-20 05:37:19 |
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The writer right below is a prime example of a dirt-bag mutt, not worth two cents. imbeciles of first order do run amok here like mangy mutts whose inane comments only reflects their utmost stupidity. this story was well built-up and generally good, far too good for crack-heads to issue unjustifiable comments. 9/10 |
| 2008-02-20 13:06:10 |
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well written with well done indepth. |
| 2008-02-20 15:29:05 |
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Great story but no McDonalds in 1956 except in CA and MN |