| 2008-02-23 07:49:01 |
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I used to live in Texas and patterened the sheriff after our local sheriff. Had been in office for 50 years and had the respect of everyone in the area. At same time, you knew that you didn't mess with the guy! |
| 2008-02-23 16:01:55 |
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Well written but a couple timing errors 10/10 |
| 2008-02-23 23:57:41 |
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very well done, a couple of minor mistakes that shouldn't matter to the story at all. 9/10 |
| 2008-02-24 01:40:01 |
Allie helps Glenn build a Road
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Gave it a 9/10, but would have readily given it a perfect 10/10 if the story were not so long winded. Instead of giving all the details of her hyment piercing, she could simply have said the Doctor took care of cutting it, and not describe every move made by said Doctor, etc. |
| 2008-03-02 07:12:44 |
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a great read! wish i had been glen for awhile. would like to know more about allies size. she was hot! |