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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-02-24 11:08:39 | Walking In Chapter 1 | dan needs to fuck alex |
| 2008-03-03 06:35:30 | Walking In Chapter 1 | fuckenze pofta shimenzehouzen! |
| 2008-02-22 13:12:14 | Ben 10 and the New Alien Chapter 6 | pretty good |
| 2008-02-22 15:02:59 | Ben 10 and the New Alien Chapter 6 | way better tha nthe last one |
| 2008-02-22 15:37:36 | Ben 10 and the New Alien Chapter 6 | The last one was more of an intermission. In a sense this is like the next 'book' so to speak. They had their summer together now it back to school and the challenges therein. Still, one thing you should consider. You have the Alien technology of the Omnitrix and Mystical Arts to play with. It's early in the 2nd act but I would hate to see the potential of either gone to waste. Keep it up and I hope to see the next chapter soon. |