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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-12-20 21:28:27 | Baby Cousin fantasy | it is a start. Ask a friend to edit it for you - it would be ten times better. I don't like the pedophilia bit, even in fiction. Good luck. |
| 2005-02-24 05:56:47 | Baby Cousin fantasy | You are still a green horn in sex! From experience it was unlike to fist a virgin a fours! Please be more logical in your writting! Good luck to you. |
| 2005-05-08 21:02:43 | Baby Cousin fantasy | i dont know if you have what it takes, try using some punctuation next time. you didnt do to badly but i would definatly say you should have someone proof read your work. next time try being a little more realistic, i know for a fact that a virgin isnt going to be able to take a full fist. that was way to unrealistic, id say 7/10 for a first story. ive read worse |
| 2005-07-22 11:38:19 | Baby Cousin fantasy | TOO BAD IT'S NOT HIS 10-YEAR-OLD DAUGHTER HE'S FISTING AND FUCKING. THEN HE AND HIS WIFE COULD SHOW HER ALL THE WAYS TO FUCK CUNTS, SUCK PUSSY, USE ASSHOLES AS A SUBSTITUTE FOR CUNTS, SUCK COCK, AND EAT CUM BOTH FROM A COCK AND FROM A FRESHLY FUCKED CUNT. DAD COULD START BY SLOWLY SLIDING HIS HARD COCK INTO HER 10-YEAR-OLD VIRGIN CUNT, FUCK HER HARD AND GIVE HER A COCK INDUCED ORGASM WHILE CUMMING UP HER BABY SNATCH. IF THE DAUGHTER WAS 8 IT WOULD BE EVEN BETTER. |
| 2005-12-04 11:05:31 | Baby Cousin fantasy | Don't write anymore. It's bad, bad, bad. Gave it a 1/10. |