| 2004-08-10 18:03:31 |
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topic sentences, paragraph structure, spell-check, verb tense, etc, etc.... |
| 2005-01-27 18:03:37 |
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well idk that was a very short story and under body modifications but you were to incest which didnt fit at all |
| 2005-08-07 20:43:58 |
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not bad under incest,but its got nothing about body-modification.nice work anyway |
| 2005-10-03 21:58:32 |
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loved it and think BOT RESONABLE. |
| 2006-08-14 13:35:57 |
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Crap |