| 2008-03-08 21:52:08 |
My Story been taught how to Fuck my Dad
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To the people that leave comments reminding us it's porn, I say well DUH! but it's hard to enjoy the story when you have bad grammar that is absolutely constant. Yes, it's not an english novel, and some grammar I can understand, but the whole story? Anyone that got out of grade school should have a better grasp of grammar than that. So to the author, please try to write better. Very hard to stay interested when the story is so badly written. |