| 2008-03-07 09:08:59 |
DNA 2 Chapter 4
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come on. i gave it a 10 cause i know youll make it good but thid part was way too short and had no sex like the description said. |
| 2008-03-08 00:31:15 |
DNA 2 Chapter 4
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have to agree with the last comment, iths has good filler, and a platform to make a great story. hoping chapter 5 caries it deeper |
| 2008-03-10 20:01:43 |
Salvation Ch. 11 Amy Jennings
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Keeping writing! These are wonderful and nasty stories. |
| 2008-03-09 13:32:26 |
Camp Site Orgy
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Very very good. Keep writing, but make sure to vary the fucking a bit. 10/10 :D |
| 2008-03-09 16:42:39 |
Camp Site Orgy
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very nice!!!! |