| 2008-03-25 19:08:36 |
Coach_(1)
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totally loved it. should be broken down into parts. can't wait for more! |
| 2008-03-26 02:37:21 |
Coach_(1)
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it was good however you confused names a bit during the trip back from the tournament. it got really confusing at times. fantastic stroy tho, very very hot. |
| 2008-03-26 04:34:36 |
Coach_(1)
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Oh my god. I love it. I agree it's kinda too long and should of been broken down into smaller parts but, it's still great. If it wasn't a work of fiction, I would praise this guy (Or you) as the luckiest coach ever. |
| 2008-03-26 06:30:36 |
Coach_(1)
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Your story was well written and very entertaining, I hope that you continue to contribute your fine works of Erotica to this Website. |
| 2008-03-26 15:09:04 |
Coach_(1)
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that was great... needs a sequel |