| 2008-03-26 18:01:15 |
Coach_(1)
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hey great story one problem though near the end u got Debbie's name mixed up with Cindy's in the final sex |
| 2008-03-27 01:40:16 |
Coach_(1)
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Damn that story was one of the best stories Ive read. A Sequel is a must great work |
| 2008-03-27 01:54:22 |
Coach_(1)
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I agree with dreamer; excellent story but a spin-off might be more entertaining than a sequel. Since Ashley is the temptress that started all this, it'd be great to hear more about her - maybe she involves Jamie in some more mischief. But a laundry list of couplings would certainly not do this story justice. |
| 2008-03-28 00:28:36 |
Coach_(1)
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i dont think it should have been broken down. I loved like reading it (not just for the sex, either, its a great story), and then jackin it, and then coming back later to read more. This is, hands down, the best story i've read on this site. |
| 2008-03-28 06:07:26 |
Coach_(1)
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nicely written best story i read yet 10/10 |