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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-04-11 09:27:10 | Young lesson in Sex | While the story itself is quite good, your writing leaves much to be desired. Your grammar, spelling and sentence structure wouldn't get you through a third grade essay. The dialouge (or lack of it) really detracts from what could have been a fine piece of work. Sorry. 2/10 |
| 2008-04-12 17:14:51 | Young lesson in Sex | It was a good story but it could have been written a lot better. At your age you certainly should be able to write better. Be sure to proofread it well before submitting your next one. Actually I am looking forward to the mother and her two daughters. |
| 2008-04-13 04:15:01 | Young lesson in Sex | if that was written in thrid person, with paragraphs and some proper grammar, that would have been fantastic. as it is....4/10 |
| 2008-04-14 02:29:01 | Young lesson in Sex | FBAILEY your an asshole that doesnt know how to shut your fucking piewhole.......since you are not able to handle people leaveing you comments dont do it to others........oh yeah.....its me.......yet again........... |
| 2008-04-14 02:32:32 | Young lesson in Sex | T&D4L message below too |