| 2008-04-07 04:28:11 |
Maeghan Wrist: C01 | [Inside Me: Book II]
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It was meant as her vagina being an opposing peice to her mouth on her body, but as it apparently does cause some confusion, which I did suspect it may, I have reworded it in my root draft to better present the actual situation. Thank you for your honesty. |
| 2008-04-11 15:47:34 |
Maeghan Wrist: C01 | [Inside Me: Book II]
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This black bastard can't write to save his life -stop now and save us the slow death of reading this rubbish. |
| 2008-04-17 08:31:38 |
Maeghan Wrist: C01 | [Inside Me: Book II]
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Why don't people READ their stuff BEFORE submitting it???? It drives me nuts that what starts out as a promising peice of writing falls aparts because the contributor can't be arsed to check the bloody thing! It makes the whole exercise - your writing it and me reading it - a waste of time!!!!!!! |
| 2008-04-07 16:18:34 |
Salvation Ch. 16 Ashdown Manor
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absolutely brilliant ...you are an exceptionally talented writer ...i am so jealous lol xx |
| 2008-04-08 14:54:30 |
Salvation Ch. 16 Ashdown Manor
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one of the best yet! |