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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-04-01 19:12:03 | What VCR?_(1) | it should have been longer |
| 2004-05-04 20:06:43 | What VCR?_(1) | same here |
| 2004-03-27 00:29:16 | Baby's Been Bad | good storie but it ended to sooon |
| 2004-06-30 11:16:58 | Baby's Been Bad | yes it did ended soon |
| 2004-02-14 01:29:08 | Fuck Toy_(0) | Too much reporting. "He did this then he did this she lay there, she whimpered". Again, there's no beginning or end just a big middle. Take the time to actually write a story and not report the latest fantasy. Foreplay works in writing too. |