2004-04-22 15:00:12 |
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im not sure you did your best on this story. i would like to see you rewrite it and add alot more details to it. Looking forwarded to seeing a rewrite. But, It was good. |
2004-04-23 10:23:31 |
Coventry Interview
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You were in a hurry to get to the money shot. Take your time when you rewrite - help us all to get to the end - and a spelling lesson or two might help. |
2004-04-25 10:11:13 |
Coventry Interview
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save for the typo I a a hard on. Good story |
2004-04-25 10:13:23 |
Coventry Interview
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Man yu had a good time with the eagle angel. Have yu fucked her again yet. I had to mustabate |
2004-04-25 10:21:33 |
Coventry Interview
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Its real. Yu a good. So when is yo next interview |