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Date Story title Comment
2005-02-21 00:40:34 ALL FOR LOVE i had cheese
2005-02-21 07:26:32 ALL FOR LOVE need paragraphs and spell check
and better names. "cheryl" and "herb" are not seductive!

also, a little more development at the start. introduce the story a bit more.

once the action started it was good.
although sometimes it seems the people changed from face down to face up magically
2005-02-21 11:57:15 ALL FOR LOVE I got bored.
2005-02-22 23:19:13 ALL FOR LOVE Good job...keep writing....made my dick trickle!
2005-02-23 18:16:06 ALL FOR LOVE It's funny that you people keep telling people to either "stop writing" or to "keep writing." Are you guys........ writers?
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