sexstories.com
Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
---|---|---|
2005-02-21 00:40:34 | ALL FOR LOVE | i had cheese |
2005-02-21 07:26:32 | ALL FOR LOVE | need paragraphs and spell check and better names. "cheryl" and "herb" are not seductive! also, a little more development at the start. introduce the story a bit more. once the action started it was good. although sometimes it seems the people changed from face down to face up magically |
2005-02-21 11:57:15 | ALL FOR LOVE | I got bored. |
2005-02-22 23:19:13 | ALL FOR LOVE | Good job...keep writing....made my dick trickle! |
2005-02-23 18:16:06 | ALL FOR LOVE | It's funny that you people keep telling people to either "stop writing" or to "keep writing." Are you guys........ writers? |