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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-11 04:49:24 | Whispers in the Dark_(1) | Very descriptive, you kept the flow of the storyline together, yet I felt the danger of being caught by Mum was everpresent. Well done. 8/10 |
| 2005-10-21 09:05:58 | Whispers in the Dark_(1) | Started good but that was the worst ending ever. What happened? Did you get tired or somthing? |
| 2005-11-01 06:25:59 | Whispers in the Dark_(1) | LOVED THE BUILDUP. WAS A LITTLE UNCOMFORTABLE WITH THE DRUGS AND ALCOHOL THOUGH. WELL I GUESS I SHOULD BE UNCOMFORTABLE WITH A FATHER HAVING SEX WITH HIS YOUNG DAUGHTER BUT NOT! THE ENDING WAS PATHETIC! WHY RUSH THE ENDING? THAT WAS WHAT ALL THE BUILDUP WAS FOR. HAD GOOD POTENTIAL SO I GAVE A 7. COULD HAVE BEEN AN 9 OR 10. |
| 2005-12-20 21:47:19 | Whispers in the Dark_(1) | crap,more crap ! |
| 2005-12-28 00:34:50 | Whispers in the Dark_(1) | I'm a daddy daughter freak, and this story was good as far as being descriptive, but I'm not into the whole drugs and alcohol thing... |