| 2004-09-15 22:59:28 |
Isabella's new school
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that was the most short crappy story i've ever read do better next time |
| 2004-09-30 22:14:00 |
Isabella's new school
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once again, as the name implies, neigh, the story sucks. i didnt even have to read the whole thing. It's not worth my time. No one even talks in this story, i know this cause theres no quotation marks or anything else.....just exclamtion points....neigh. |
| 2004-10-18 20:00:05 |
Isabella's new school
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hard to follow , it's an F- for you |
| 2004-12-16 13:57:32 |
Isabella's new school
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Like, Bam - Bam thank you mam. Why are you writers so eager to cram so much material in to a small space. This was like the first draft outline of the real story. Too bad, the idea is good. |
| 2005-03-07 17:37:34 |
Isabella's new school
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alright who's fucking who? can't tell b/c u can't write!!! |