| 2004-07-07 02:29:26 |
Do it till Dawn
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It was a great story, but it wasn't a great porn story, which is what this site is for.......good story though I enjoyed reading it. |
| 2004-07-20 15:04:10 |
Do it till Dawn
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excellent story, don't listen to that other guy, story first then sex, a good story makes the sex part better |
| 2004-07-27 02:36:56 |
Do it till Dawn
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all i gotta say is wow ... dude u got alot of talent, u should keep that shit up, a great story makes great sex, only thing that i didnt like, was u wrote so much story ... u barly wrote any sex, man with that long of a story u woulda expected more sex, but right on brother u get an honest 9/10 |
| 2004-10-26 22:15:33 |
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Xcellent story, u should look into going into showbiz, u have a lot of talent, i loved it. keep up the good work, and write more. |
| 2005-03-25 12:59:56 |
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I didnt mind it, personally... A good story is one that LEADS UP TO the sex.... not "Once upon a FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK... the end." But rather a story that tells whats going on, keeps you into it with some 'we almost screwed' stuff then the part where it is dirty, sweaty sex that everyone wants to read about... This earns a 10/10 in my opinion because of the sheer talent. |