| 2004-07-06 15:32:59 |
Man on Page 602
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that's some bullshit |
| 2004-08-02 12:15:28 |
Man on Page 602
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What a great thing to write... i hope most of this is autobiographical....somewhe... there's a mag that will publish this, just with some polish...good effort! |
| 2005-07-27 16:14:41 |
Man on Page 602
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i love the pinchie song |
| 2005-09-27 00:53:49 |
Man on Page 602
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Holly, you are word mechanic. I really loved that 13 yo masterbation scene and you did it without 3&4 letter words that all too often brutalize a story. keep up the good work young lady. you write and I will read |
| 2004-05-04 14:25:00 |
Keep it in the family_(1)
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Great story. Boy does this bring back memories. Keep writing. Great job |