| 2004-06-30 09:13:53 |
the afair
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Could have got a better rating if you knew how to make a sentence Fucker. 3/10 |
| 2004-07-02 11:29:11 |
the afair
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Punctuation, spelling, paragraphs.........where are they?? |
| 2005-01-28 16:45:55 |
the afair
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"She meet me at the door?" Why insult the readers with such a poor effort? |
| 2005-01-29 21:37:10 |
the afair
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Afair? What in hell's name is an afair? it is the first line of an idiot's venture into the world of public embarrassment. |
| 2005-06-13 19:01:41 |
the afair
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you dog fucking bastard ............your story sucked.i figuer you never got laid by a person. you dont know how to make parragraphs or Punctuation i would say spelling but i cant ether. and i just wanted to add not only did you have an end but the you finish of with a hairy pussy.......you god damned crazy...... |