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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-01 12:16:33 | Party Time_(2) | Loved That There Was Nothing She Could Do But Submit This Bitch Deserved Every In And Every Drop Of Dick And Cum ( She Loved Every Bit Of It To:-) ) |
| 2007-06-04 00:20:56 | Party Time_(2) | THE LENTH WAS NO PROBLEM; IT WAS NEEDED, or it could not flow, yet two things hinderr u (see prior ) One: diction. (1a. you came up with ideals to please all which became prime rather than YOUR' STORY. 1b: a body can't preform as written, 10 could; hint ) Two: be more antilitical ( 2a. timelines, facts, then emotion.2b. point: don't exspect readers understand NOTE: one reads this length, because they like it! |
| 2007-06-10 02:42:51 | Party Time_(2) | I'm so jealous of her. |
| 2008-02-03 01:50:20 | Party Time_(2) | u r fukc |
| 2004-05-14 15:13:57 | the afair | Idiot, write all or nothing. Stupid end |