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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-08-10 18:16:57 | the afair2 | all caps are offensive. to much 'and then i, and then i, and then i'. you need some character reaction and mindset to make it interesting, not just a series of actions linked by 'ands' and commas. |
| 2007-01-09 23:07:07 | the afair2 | Don't bother woth [art 3 |
| 2007-10-07 00:02:31 | the afair2 | Not so great and all caps really suck ass. i hear a rewrite in the works |
| 2004-05-17 10:45:55 | Lube in the Subway | Have read better versions of this |
| 2004-05-17 19:32:13 | Lube in the Subway | great |