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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-06-06 23:09:44 | Lube in the Subway | Bad punctuation can ruin the story as you stumble over it to find the meaning of the letters that surround it. The word is "eyes" not "eye's". Plural, not possessive! Try 5th grade again. On the bright side, the writing has a good style, bumping along very much like a subway... |
| 2004-06-13 01:19:51 | Lube in the Subway | Not convinced. It's a sexy idea, but what about the logistics? You can't just walk up to a woman and, while both of you are standing, insert your penis straight into her. She has to spread her legs a bit, bend the knees, lift a leg. The guy has to crouch down a bit, get a wide stance. In other words, it would be a little more obvious. Grammar aside, I can't decide if your style is weak or brilliant, there's definitely something to it. |
| 2004-06-21 16:48:09 | Lube in the Subway | Great story. |
| 2004-10-02 11:23:40 | Lube in the Subway | Seen worse on the 5:15 express to stop 13 from work last Thursday. Try writing something original idiot. |
| 2004-10-02 11:28:57 | Lube in the Subway | refreshingly light hearted and totally unbelievable... A perfect fantasy! |