| 2004-06-10 01:06:25 |
Sweet revenge_(2)
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I think this is a very great story ,and the use of words is great,what makes the reader visualise it in aright way like the writer needed,also the writer was succesful in exciting the readers to the continuation of the story ,as well as hitting all of the hot spots in the acting of sex,and also the story dealt with a very delicate frodian issu wich is the sexual attraction betwen a brother and a sister,but i think that most of us inspite of how horny or lusting for sex we could be wont resolve to the same ending ,be i think your a very talented writer and i will wait for the continuing of the storie.and i hope if the writer sees this i to replay on on my e-mail . |