| 2004-06-16 04:54:45 |
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THIS STORY WAS GOOD. I HOPE YOU CAN HURRY UP WITH THE SECOUND PART OF IT.AND MAKE IT MORE INTERRESTING. AND ALSO DONT TAKE TO LONG IN THE BEGINNING LIKE YOU DID IN THIS ONE BECAUSE THAT WAS LIKE SO BORING WATING TO GET TO THE GOOD PARTS IN THIS STORY. YOU HAD A FREAT CHOICE OF WORDS YOUR STORY COMPLETELY ROCKED IT WAS EXCITING . I REALLY LIKED IT AND REALLY I HOPE YOU HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT PART TO IT. |
| 2004-06-16 15:32:40 |
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The I liked this out of the other stories is because it had a storyline. Most stories get straight to the sex, that's why they suck. The point of the story to make it a good one is always a story line and I don't care if i have to wait for the good parts. |
| 2004-06-17 05:17:01 |
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OMG! if you don't keep going with that there will be blood! that is the sexiest iincest thing i've ever read. I don't care if it's the same ppl, don't go into anal, (not my thing) Do one where the older sis takes andvantage of the younger brother. That's always hot! |
| 2004-06-28 23:31:01 |
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I agree that this is one of the few stories that has some meat and plot to it. Keep up the good work and make the stories a little more interesting instead of jumping right into the sex part of it. We need more blackmail stories in particular |
| 2004-07-25 23:45:15 |
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that was pretty good when do we get the next part |