| 2004-05-20 19:26:41 |
Sara, part 2
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When's part 3 coming out? |
| 2004-05-20 20:14:32 |
Sara, part 2
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no errors, if im wrong then there is 1 or 2. well written but extremely slow going and lamer then fuck, i figured when he said "you can do anything you want to me" she'd end up riding him like a rodeo bull or somethin lol, but i gotta sick mind so whatever. but seriously all this just for a handjob? god damn |
| 2004-05-20 23:31:40 |
Sara, part 2
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wow ur a great writer, you should try writing books instead of sex stories |
| 2004-05-21 01:06:20 |
Sara, part 2
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Very well done. You leave a lot to the imagination for your next story. Thanks. |
| 2004-05-21 02:14:15 |
Sara, part 2
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Good stuff. Great writing. |