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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-06-15 01:28:02 | The Yellow Rose | I agree with Dexi...this story doesnt have anything to do with sex that i am aware of...so a guy is sent on a wild goose chase to find what?...im sorry but i like it more black and white before me...w/e...this story sucked......i mean...it isnt erotic, arousing, and it has nothing to do with sex...but w/e... |
| 2004-07-13 23:57:33 | The Yellow Rose | Dick shrinking shit. |
| 2005-02-27 16:18:28 | The Yellow Rose | What is the meaning of all of this. I adimt the attention getter of the story but where did it lead? Invisible indeed! |
| 2005-07-19 12:11:27 | The Yellow Rose | Gday Alcimedes, This is the first time I've made a comment on this site. I've read a few of your other stories and I think you've got talent. But I think this story does need to go somewhere more. It's not a bad effort and start though. You probably should write a Pt2 to " Laurie" first though as it was your best effort and could easy have some followups. See ya |
| 2005-09-22 14:42:04 | The Yellow Rose | Another great beginin to what will undoubtededly another amazing piece of your work. |