| 2006-05-10 13:25:25 |
The Yellow Rose
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Another excellent story by this author. All his stories are characterized by very graphic, vivid, realistic emotions-feelings. One of best erotic authors!!! |
| 2008-02-17 20:44:28 |
The Yellow Rose
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A few errors, and you really should have continued it, and you should write non-erotic in the tag section next time with a story like this. |
| 2004-05-20 23:09:21 |
Paul
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Extraordinarily well written (except for the its and it's). But this is still pretty tame stuff. |
| 2004-06-22 16:39:39 |
Paul
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it was good ........ but are you gonna make another part |
| 2004-07-09 22:06:21 |
Paul
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this story mademe want to play with myself until I made my self cum |