| 2004-06-07 22:21:38 |
Experimenting with sister
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Very nice. I really enjoyed it |
| 2004-06-08 01:21:58 |
Experimenting with sister
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Hi ! This is the author. Rereading this story while actually awake sure does highlight the grammatical errors. (Note to self: Don't write stories at 1am-3am in the morning) This is my first story that I've ever posted, anywhere. Thanks for your feedback. All constructive criticism is welcome. If you liked or disliked it, could you please tell me why. Email me through this site. |
| 2004-06-08 19:52:01 |
Experimenting with sister
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wow, was very interested! nice 1! 9/10 |
| 2004-06-08 22:01:25 |
Experimenting with sister
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wow that was awsome really sexy story |
| 2004-06-09 04:30:32 |
Experimenting with sister
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it was alright but i wasn't even turned on butit was still good. :-} |