| 2004-06-09 21:17:25 |
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Yeah, that was a really good story, up until the end..it could've been a bit better. |
| 2004-06-10 00:09:35 |
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i liked it!! it was a great story. u should bring sis back from bording school a little older and when the kid gets a little more experence lol. well keep up the great work |
| 2004-06-12 01:26:53 |
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O.O i really liked it O.O she should've stayed...been able to teach him more stuff ;) but its awesome anyway!!! |
| 2004-06-12 03:50:51 |
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Good story, I do not pick on gramer lol.. I agree the ending was a bit soft and left you wanting. Can't wait for you to bring back his sis from bording school to pick up with his education. (hoping). |
| 2004-06-12 15:43:07 |
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sweet....could have been a little better like more actual action then that |