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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-01-03 18:51:43 | A night of fire | Great context but you need to have a longer sex scene. Maybe dedicate 2-3 more paragraphs to the sex and then wrap it up with the wake up call. P.S. If you people call him a loser then why don't you just read suntin else and leave these good fantasies alone! |
| 2005-01-04 23:45:07 | A night of fire | I think some grammar lessons and a class in proper punctuation wouldn't hurt. |
| 2005-02-27 23:22:42 | A night of fire | I think the story is funny, not to mention not bad readen. It could have been a little longer but over all i thought it was good....i'll give ya an 8 |
| 2004-06-09 17:19:31 | Me And My Cuz Pt 1 | it's a good story but it could be longer. |
| 2004-06-09 20:51:57 | Me And My Cuz Pt 1 | WHERE'S THE END? |