| 2004-06-13 23:19:39 |
Me And My Cuz Pt 1
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more slow beginning, hotter action. Good use of adjectives. Not alot of mistakes or redundant word uses. All-in-all, decent. . . . . .but still not the perfect story I've heard. |
| 2004-06-16 23:56:36 |
Me And My Cuz Pt 1
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Stupid As Fuck |
| 2004-07-08 14:16:41 |
Me And My Cuz Pt 1
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i could just write :i fucked my cousin" . |
| 2004-09-13 20:17:18 |
Me And My Cuz Pt 1
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This was just fucking boring. I did not had the chance to masturbate as I usually do with other stories. Keep intros shorter more hot action |
| 2004-10-06 01:21:10 |
Me And My Cuz Pt 1
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Yes, the beginning is BORING, but it tells u what is going on. And the ending did turn me on, I have done sexual stuff with my own sister...but I don't think I could broadcast it online!!! Sorry guys...just check your writing, and make it more sexier and make the intro a little more exciting |