| 2004-07-11 07:14:34 |
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il give u a 10 for this |
| 2004-08-10 03:04:58 |
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Hey, this isn't s.o., this is his friend. i entered his newest work into the site tonite but i don't know how long this stuff takes to get put on the site. i found his xnxx folder, and it had his name, password, and all that stuff in it along with his only other written entry, which is a poem. i see a lot of people like his work but unfortunately hes no longer able to get on here... its a long story but you wont see his work anymore after the poem, it's called "finale" and it will be on the site eventually, sorry about this, depressed people like him just don't last long without snapping, sadly. |
| 2004-08-13 22:23:48 |
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This was awesome... now on to part 2... can't wait |
| 2005-02-12 21:30:01 |
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omg i have had dreams of getting raped on a tree with a nife at me neck hehe this made me all wet cant wait to read what happens next 10/10 |
| 2005-02-26 17:13:49 |
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Wow! Great idea for a story. Good plot tension. Good dialogue, too. However, i've got two words for you, darlin': SPELL CHECK! Here, for example, are just a few of the many misspellings you offered in this tale: "dailey", "openned", "iiback", "Ahyhow", and "tounge". Misspellings, especially so many, really detract from most reader's enjoyment of a story if they're looking for more then whack-off material. 8 of 10, graded down for technical errors. |