| 2005-02-26 17:15:14 |
REVENGE! Stage 2 - Error & Solution
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Again, good plotting, really good dialogue, good overall story construction, and **excellent** deviant stuff. On the other side, again, lie a horrid use of the English language in the form of innumerable misspellings and other asorted grammatical errors, i.e., "effected" instead of "affected" in the chapter's first sentence. A lot of people have a difficult time with such problems and end up downgrading or not reading stories that contain them. 8 of 10, again, because of the glaring errors. |