| 2004-10-21 01:03:41 |
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niice, man u r a fuckin mastermind! like....shakespeare+rambo+h... its awesome man!! wooah mail me ne one cuz this shits awesome!! |
| 2005-01-17 17:33:10 |
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i think it was awsome in it's own sick twisted way. Can't wait to the next part. |
| 2005-02-14 01:04:19 |
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awesome |
| 2005-02-26 17:16:38 |
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Good follow-through from story to story. Really creative overall; so many of these kinds of stories have a dreary similarity. Unfortunately, there's that old familiar demon within this story like those that came before: the spelling and grammar are atrocious. They're too obvious and too horrible to be overlooked and interfere, for some of us, with being able to really settle into this story. Sad. Nine points of 10, though, for originality in a largely unoriginal genre. |
| 2005-03-04 16:51:42 |
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Damn man. He gets more fucked up, and I get more into it |