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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-07-20 18:35:04 | REVENGE! Stage 4 - Going for Broke | I am really not sure how you do it each story gets better and better next up part 5. |
| 2004-08-10 03:16:15 | REVENGE! Stage 4 - Going for Broke | DarkAngel, S.O. meant to contact you, but sadly certain things happened which is also why he no longer writes on this site. He's not going to return, at least not to the site. I can set up a conversation between you and him but I don't know how he will act and I don't know if you have AIM. S.O.'s SN on AIM is NoMoreRasberries, if you want to have a live conversation with him then get AIM (if you dont have it, aol instant messenger) and contact him. He can't write stories anymore tho. |
| 2004-08-10 18:13:38 | REVENGE! Stage 4 - Going for Broke | Her injury was way too intense for someone with such a low pain tolerance to tolerate, much less unlocked, open, and exit through a door far enough to make it to help. --- too many run-on, confusing sentences. you must simplify. |
| 2004-08-13 13:40:48 | REVENGE! Stage 4 - Going for Broke | To the Author: Do you honestly believe your psuedo-homicidal babble is poetry or at best even somewhat inspired? You, like most writers, wallow in your self-righteousness. Although, unlike most, you don't know how to write, let alone the rules. Intellectually and artistically you are unimpressive and somewhat vulgar - a man of little taste. Do consider bathing in bleach for us. I'd consider it a "friendly favor." |
| 2004-09-21 17:23:32 | REVENGE! Stage 4 - Going for Broke | S.O.'s friend whoever you are thanks for the very sad information. Please if you can e-mail me we can start from there. |