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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-02-25 19:41:19 | The Study Date | Constructive critism is always better; - Try and read through your story after and make sure it all makes sense (and in your case believable) - Spelling was good - Try and make it longer |
| 2005-02-25 19:46:08 | The Study Date | Wow, I can sum this up in two words "proof read" |
| 2005-05-10 17:39:12 | The Study Date | Learn to spell and take the advice, CUZ it can help you in the future. Rock On Dude |
| 2005-06-16 17:59:56 | The Study Date | what the hell don't you know how to fucking spell!!!!!!!!!!! this story sucked dick! literally. Bitch have some one else read your story before you put it out or maybe just stop writing altogether. i give you a negative15/10 |
| 2005-07-04 03:11:19 | The Study Date | it was alright... you can do better!! |