2005-02-25 01:59:45 |
New Wife, New Neighbors
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I see you are getting better. Cant wait until the next one. Stiff but going down fast. Make the climax heavier and we can then talk. Great stuff tho. |
2005-02-25 15:00:34 |
New Wife, New Neighbors
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Where did the mind control part fuckin come in? 7/10 |
2005-02-25 21:54:49 |
New Wife, New Neighbors
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I like the drug part, but perhaps it should have been introduced sooner. I didn't really care for the chain-up part, But you did a good job with it, and the entire story earned a 9/10 |
2005-02-26 23:01:33 |
New Wife, New Neighbors
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I guess to do all that your mind would have to be controled. Sometimes the mind is funny. Just a look can trigger something off. |
2005-03-07 01:04:23 |
New Wife, New Neighbors
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Thanks Dan Ill try for you harder then. |