| 2005-04-09 07:36:24 |
Mistress Karen
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What a load of shit the biggest peice of shit i have ever read what a let down i cant beleive how WANK this story was |
| 2005-10-10 06:57:48 |
Mistress Karen
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this is crap. it reads like it was written be a highschooler. |
| 2006-11-24 18:41:24 |
Mistress Karen
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good story not written very well though |
| 2007-08-13 05:02:46 |
Mistress Karen
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That was horrible. |
| 2004-04-03 15:06:06 |
Her Ladyship
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What Happend to the guy? did she just kill him and not make him a vampire I mean it was a bit far fetched for Vapirerisam |