| 2007-03-02 02:35:53 |
Her Ladyship
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great! ..i hope you write another! |
| 2004-02-24 23:20:21 |
The End of Lance
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Stupid crap- This author needs professional help |
| 2004-07-11 23:37:15 |
The End of Lance
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This is what you write when you've been brutally molested and/or raped. The grammar and spelling are good enough but the content will go down like a bone in one's throat. The author exhibits a seething hatred of men that borders on the pathological and criminal. Since most of the readers on this site are immature, sexually insecure teenage boys the story's rating will drop like a ton of bricks. It oozes hatred and leaves a bitter taste in the mouth. It will take years of trauma counselling and rehabilitation before the author may develop normal relationships with men. Get help FK. You REALLY need it. |
| 2004-02-23 10:15:02 |
The Mannequin
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SICK....SICK...SICK |
| 2004-04-07 16:45:33 |
The Mannequin
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dude this sucked dont ever write again |