| 2004-06-21 11:41:08 |
Tom and his Twin Sisters
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The story kinda confused me at first but Then it got great. Keep on writing I look forward to future stories |
| 2004-06-21 15:21:05 |
Tom and his Twin Sisters
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Wish i had twin sisters |
| 2004-06-21 15:54:22 |
Tom and his Twin Sisters
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dam i could do your sisters a 100 times |
| 2004-06-21 16:51:20 |
Tom and his Twin Sisters
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really good. really really god i loved it keep writing and i'm waiting for this story that's meant for another day. |
| 2004-06-21 23:24:30 |
Tom and his Twin Sisters
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damn man, u got some real talent. the one suggestion i would make is to put in some paragraph breaks. otherwise the story was absolutley perfect. keep on writing man, im waiting for the sequel |