| 2004-06-23 16:27:06 |
Tom and his Twin Sisters
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great story cant wait for parnt 2 |
| 2004-06-27 07:58:32 |
Tom and his Twin Sisters
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More discriptive. Longer story content. Draw the story line out more, it seems to me. But, great read. |
| 2004-07-03 13:27:55 |
Tom and his Twin Sisters
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Dude mad storie alwayz loved the twin action, keep writin and dont listen to critic and watever thay dont know wat their talkin bout uv got tallent. Keep up the good work. |
| 2004-07-03 17:13:38 |
Tom and his Twin Sisters
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Awesome. Sure it needs minor editing, but it's still damn good. 8/10 |
| 2004-07-03 17:58:52 |
Tom and his Twin Sisters
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very nice but culd have a little more description... |